itÄs really beautifull.. just the teeth are a little bit too white unnatural

I know, but actually I did it kinda on purpose (spelling?),
It was a crzy and drunk night, so I made her teeth very with to give it a crazy touch,
I know it is unnatural, but my aim is not to paint these pictures over realistic.
Not the reference is the art, but what I did with it

(not sure I'd call my work art at the other hand)

Thanks for the comment. I really appreciate it

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lovely portrait. I love the colors and the contrast in the hair. I think her teeth need a bit of shading, since they look like just a white line in her mouth, and the eyes need to be sharpened. the blur in her skin is softening and very stylized, but in her eyes it's a little too much. perfect sharpness isn't necessary, in my opinion, but the amount of softness has to fit the size of the object you're detailing, and I think you need less blur for the eyes especially. they should be the natural center of interest, but without any more detail over the rest of the drawing, it's hard to lock onto any center of interest.

sorry, that was horribly rambling. hope it makes some sense, at least.

Ahhh, I love indept comments,
and in fact, I'll go alter it right now
Glad you checked my humble place out

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glad you added me to your watch ^_^

Ahhh, your a friend, and you have a wide variety of work, which I like

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Damn! echt wel nice gedaan!

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